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first draft

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Here's another little digital turd I threw together as a means of occupying my time here at the UDC where I so conventiently have access to PS. Please critique your heart out on this,
052505
feel for it
and PieceOfCrap
'cuz I think it'd be pretty nice if they could become presentable pieces. I won't be insulted if you're mean -- they're really just things I tossed together and didn't give a second thought. All I know is my art teacher said he likes 052505, so maybe I'm at least on the right track???

photo by the dear Avenator: daretolove

(Sorry to my dear, dear watchers for the edits in your message centres!!!)
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Ohhh pink underskin, how I love the. You should use what you wrote about the underskin in something, it was a lovely read.

The razor bit reminds me of the scene in the wall where the guy freaks the fuck out, destroys the room, and shaves his entire body, and In doing so, shaves his nipples off.

As for the piece, I like the way you've arranged the text on the side, and the color you've dropped behind it. The color of the picture and the color around the text work well together. I've seen the story before maybe in a couple of places. I like that you use it multiply times. You should use it more, lots more. It should become a very known thing. This piece is just this piece. It's not someting I expect to speak gigantic volumes, rather it is a basically a pretty much well designed image. The only thing I have trouble with is the big square space of the accual picture. maybe it's the border you've placed around it.